Fictional sample
Helena Marsh
Registered Nurse Health Services Administration Officer
I set up a discharge checklist with the NUM in 2022, our average discharge time moved from 2:30pm to 11:45am over six months
What the writer did
- Kept her own numbers exactly as she gave them
- Used the job ad's wording, such as patient administration system and rosters, where her notes say the same thing
- Left out Medicare billing: the ad asks for it, and she did not mention it
